Okay, for English we are going to edit and improve the letter you wrote before the Easter break. Please go through the presentation with you letter and work with you. If you have a sibling or parent to help to read the letter to and give their opinion that would be great (it asks you to do this at certain points in the presentation). Also use the 'Formal Letter Checklist' to help you see if you have used all features of formal letter writing correctly or add in any you haven't use if you can.
You only have to check and edit your work today, tomorrows task will be to fully publish your letter.