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This week we are going to work to create our own piece of descriptive writing about a theme park.


From the reading we completed on Friday we created a success criteria in class.


Please look through the success criteria and the example of descriptive writing from Friday. Can you find and rainbow mark features in it? Then re-read the part of cosmic where Liam goes to the theme park. Today we are just going to think about this theme park. Can you identify some descriptive writing in the text and can you create at least 3 descriptive sentences of your own based on Liam's experience?